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They flutter from the sky
A dance of crystalline creatures
Whirling, spinning, descending
Dappling the air, frosting the land
They link hands and crowd together
A curtain of icy lace
Weaves together
And
A great white quilt
Blankets the earth
I spread my palm
One tiny snowflake settles down
I briefly, quickly gaze at the minuscule wonder
Just as my eyes focus
The snowflake melts away.
:icondarkmysticrose:
cute little poem about snow ^^
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I really enjoyed this. The flow was smooth and it helped me visualize your words well. I really enjoyed how you went from talking about the snow to how you put yourself in perspective with the snow. I really enjoyed the last two lines "Just as my eyes focus The snowflake melts away." It reminds me of how a camera takes a picture of a moment in time and as soon as its taken that moment too is gone. These last sentences can relate to may things in life, but I love how simply you made them translate with the snow.
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*Me2Smart4U Jan 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
well written indeed... I truly enjoyed reading.. the contrast sets the mood for the whole poem; it has a very deep and unique flow and as a reader I deeply feel the true emotions expressed ..:boogie:
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So true!! ^^ your poetry is so smooth and pretty!
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Mood: Love ~S3CRETS0UL Jan 2, 2013   General Artist
Beautiful! This truly is wonderful=D!!
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Mood: Joy ~DarkMysticRose Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle: Aww! Thank you!^^
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Mood: Cheerful ~S3CRETS0UL Jan 2, 2013   General Artist
You are so very welcome=D!
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Mood: Zest !DancingShadowLeaves Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I agree. It is beautiful. :D
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Mood: Joy ~DarkMysticRose Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle: Thank you so much!! ^^
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Mood: Affection !DancingShadowLeaves Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I am only stating the truth. :nod:
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Mood: Seasonal ~creampuffluvr Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful
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