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If I could hold the stars
I'd give them all to you
and string them on a necklace
to last you through and through
If I could grab the oceans
and store them in a jar
To place inside your pocket
To take with long and far
If I could quilt a blanket
and stitch it up with light
I'd sew it with our memories
to keep you warm at night
If I could grow a pair of wings
I'd show you how to fly
and whisper not to be afraid
of gazing from the sky
If I could walk the roads of time
and travel to the past
I'd record every moment
To make sure that it'd last
If I could only show you
How much you mean to me
This poem will keep my feelings
For all eternity.
I'd give them all to you
and string them on a necklace
to last you through and through
If I could grab the oceans
and store them in a jar
To place inside your pocket
To take with long and far
If I could quilt a blanket
and stitch it up with light
I'd sew it with our memories
to keep you warm at night
If I could grow a pair of wings
I'd show you how to fly
and whisper not to be afraid
of gazing from the sky
If I could walk the roads of time
and travel to the past
I'd record every moment
To make sure that it'd last
If I could only show you
How much you mean to me
This poem will keep my feelings
For all eternity.
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Very well done! Only two lines that lost the rhythm are:
I'd record every moment
To make sure that it'd last
...may want to consider reworking them.
Sean
I'd record every moment
To make sure that it'd last
...may want to consider reworking them.
Sean